The diagram shows the process of water treatment

The provided picture illustrates the processing of how the water had been treated.

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, It is obvious to see that the drink had been passed through

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many equipment sections, from intake screens

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the finished place. First of all, the first gate was intake screens from the ocean to pumps,

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the water went along to the second stop called the flash mix to oxidants and chloride the rain.

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, continues to the fourth place at flocculation. After the flocculation step, the material had to be

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into the big plot and

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go ahead to the chlorine station.

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, moving across to the next step, the filter membrane, to recheck the quality of the product. After the finish from the catching the membrane,

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it has to stop at the disinfection, by using lime, chlorine, and fluoride to mix with the material. Before going to the final destination, it had to be set on the pump,

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through the faucet for the household.