Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attraction. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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to foreign

tourist

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than local

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for both cultural and historical

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. I strongly disagree

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statement because of partiality.

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with, I believe there should be equality of the price

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regardless of

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nationality, residency and citizenship because

this

is to prevent

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further

biases and prejudice that could

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conflict and financial damage in the future.

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, when a

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foreigner

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found

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out that they would pay

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higher

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fee than

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native

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, they will really feel sad,

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discourage

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and disinterested

to proceed

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to their destination.

This

would create hostile

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among

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Furthermore

, inequality of charge will

resulted

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to

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loss of income because few foreign visitors are willing to see the

tourist

landmark

due to

different

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this

continues,

the

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some workers

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certain

tourist

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will lose their

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because there is no income generated

coming

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from foreign

tourist

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Lastly

, the local government should interfere in the process of implementing economically justifiable

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prices

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to

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all cultural and historical

attraction

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attractions

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.

This

is

due to

the fact that there is partiality between native

tourist

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and foreign

tourist

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. The good perspective

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the foreigners on the place will

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. Tarnish reputation is not definitely good for the

tourist

attraction. To

conlcude

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, it is imperative that the Government

will

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intervene how much will be the rate of

the

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tourist

attraction for both foreign

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and local

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without any biases. Equality of rate should be implemented in order to gain

trust

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for

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both

foreigner

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and

native

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.