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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates how much quantity of
milk
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production
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 produced in four countries in the span of
three
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years
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 which are 1990, 2000 and 2010. The main shed of light on
this
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production
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 in the span of
three
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 given
years
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 was
milk
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 produced by four countries
Netherlands
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, Australia, Tanzania and
Guatemala
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.
However
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, the
Netherlands
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 had the highest annual load of
milk
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 producers in the span of all
three
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years
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 and
Guatemala
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 had the lowest annual supply of
milk
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 producers spanning of whole
three
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years
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. supply of
milk
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 is in
litres
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. The given table shows that the
Netherlands
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 and Australia produced the largest amount of
milk
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 produced among the four countries. The
Netherlands
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 produced nearly 11
crore
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 liters in 1990 and ended up with nearly 11
crore
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 500 lakh liters in 2010.
On the other hand
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, Australia started
production
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 is same as the
Netherlands
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production
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 of nearly 11
crore
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litres
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 in 1990 and ended up with the lowest extent of nearly 9 crores.
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, Tanzania and
Guatemala
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 counted the lowest extent of
milk
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production
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. Tanzania produced below 1
crore
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litres
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 in 1990 and hit nearly 1. 5 crores in 2010.
On the other hand
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,
Guatemala
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's starting
production
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 in 1990 was 26 thousand and ended up with below 1
crore
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litres
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 in 2010.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production, three, years, netherlands, guatemala, litres, crore with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 5 times.
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