The chart below shows the number of men and women (in thousand) in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
bar chart depicts the figure for the number of male and female students in three various periods of time in the UK and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. It is clear from the graph that , there were two tendencies for part-time education, where one is a gradual decrease for men
and the other is a steady rise for women.
According to
what is shown, in 1970, the majority of men
preferred to study partly, whereas
for women this
was the same,
but on a smaller scale. The figures were at 990 and 750 respectively. Remove the comma
apply
Nevertheless
, in the subsequent years, the number of female part-time students rose to 1100 in 1990, reaching the highest spot in the table. On the other hand
, men
experienced a decline with fluctuations, where the numbers dropped significantly to 850 and rose slightly to 880.
To sum up
, we could say that, full-time education was chosen more for both genders over the years. In 1970, the numbers for men
and women were 100 and 50 respectively and the number of full-time students reached 200 for both genders.Submitted by Leb.7149 on
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