The table shows the export values of various products in 2009 and 2010
The table illustrates the changes in the export values of five different products from 2009 to 2010.It is clear from the graph that ,equipment exports had the highest value of the five during the period.
While
the sales of telecommunication and metals witnessed a considerable rise, the figures for clothing and manufacturing products significantly decreased.
According to
what is shown, It can be clearly observed from the table that the overall
sales of all categories went up from $32 billion
in 2009 to $38.4 billion
in 2010, which accounted for a 20% change. The amount of money earned from equipment was the highest in 2009 (at $10.3 billion
) in comparison with $7.9 billion
for telecommunication and $2.3 billion
for metals.
To sum up
, we could say that, the sales of clothing and manufacturing went down over the time period. The figure for manufacturing products dropped from $5.5 billion
to $4 billion
making up a 27% change, which was 10% more than that of clothing.Submitted by Leb.7149 on
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