The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.
The maps depict developments in the design of a bookstore between 2000 and the present.
Overall
, the arrangement of the bookstore has been significantly changed, especially on the left side of the room. A number of features have been moved and modified while
other facilities have been added.
In 2000, there was a large section which is called fiction on the left side of the store. However
, that section has been divided into four new sections that books
on art, hobbies, cookery and fiction area
are now demonstrated. The area
for fiction books
in the left corner of the store has been used for non-fictional books
whereas
previous
non-fiction Correct article usage
the previous
area
has been changed into a new cafe. In 2000, the central area
of the store was used for art, hobbies and cookery books
. However
, now that area
have
been demolished and tables and chairs have been added. The space for travel, new Change the verb form
has
books
and service desk
remained unchanged throughout Fix the agreement mistake
desks
period
.Add an article
the period
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