A flow chart shows the process of processing wool into cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

A giving flow chart presents the process of wool which is a type of cloth's ingredient from sheep

flu

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to cloth.

It is clear that

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there are many steps

of

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in

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whole

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the whole

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process,

it

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is

also

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be explains

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in three parts. The first

step

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of the first

part

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of

process

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the process

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is shearing the

flu

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from sheep skin.

Secondly

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,

cleaning

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out

dust

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the dust

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of

flu

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and washing several times until it is clear enough for

using

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.

Then

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, drying is a very important and hard

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,

also

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is the

last

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step

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of

this

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part

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. The

sceond

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second

part

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begin

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with processing wool by spinning dry

flu

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,

then

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colouring wool tufts and

store

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storing

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them in storage spaces. There are some string wools

recycle

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recycled

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in the spinning

step

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as well.

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, moving to the

last

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part

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, yarn balls can be

servied

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served

serviced

for knitting or made

to

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into

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products which

sale

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in cloth stores and

vanders

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venders

vendors

,

such

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as different

style

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styles

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of carpets and jackets.