Advantages and disadvantages using internet in the modern era

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There are
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of benefits and drawbacks of
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employing
the internet. The advantages of
this
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are that users can access
of
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knowleages
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knowledge
knowledges
,
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infromations
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information
and it
improve
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communications.
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, the disadvantages are that it creates addictions to
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devices, and
serve
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serves
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pronography
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pornography
and
voilance
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violence
among the consumers. One
benefits
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benefit
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of improving
knowleages
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knowledge
knowledges
and
people
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can learn
instead
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without
wateing
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wasting
watering
of
time
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in
library
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the library
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or other places is
becasue
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because
the website
provide
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provides
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vide
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wide
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range of data
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the
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just one
clicks
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click
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.
This
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is
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because
in the past individuals
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rely
really
on the
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other resources
which is
time
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consming, but
these day
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they can take online
cources
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courses
and
enhacne
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enhance
their
knowlages
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knowledge
knowledges
which is quite
defficult
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difficult
in the past.
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, it has improved
communcation
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communication
the way
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people
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are using
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thesedays
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these days
to connect
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with thier
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thier
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their
family or
other
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others
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in a piece of
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Due to
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this
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individuals can make video
call
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and phone
call
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without sending a
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which
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long
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time
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befor
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before
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it
hard
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to connect the friends or famillies.
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, when
studends
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students
went to
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abroad
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for their higher education they can connect
their
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with their
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familfy
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families
on
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what's aap or
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through
any form of media which was not
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happening
in the past.
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, a drawback is the
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of
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technologies
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technology
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devices is that
people
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are spending lots of
time
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on
an online games
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online games
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and
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it
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reduced
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their
affecency
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efficiency
.
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to say that when they are going to market or office they
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thier
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their
smartphone during the
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commuting
computing
they
loose
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their
focase
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focus
on
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work or roads which might be
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lent
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on
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accidents.
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Secondly
, it promotes
sexuailty
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sexuality
and
voilance
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violence
between the children, they are
incocent
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innocent
and
dont
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don't
know about their procs and cons. when they play
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gams or
studies
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on websites
unauthontic
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unauthentic
authentic
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pops
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on the
screan
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screen
and they see them before
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their
ages. Games are spreading
voilance
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violence
among the children and they used to
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an opponents
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an opponent
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in the games. it is increasing
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aggression and it shows in small
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when someone
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of
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the
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gadgets
gates
gametes
from their hands.
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, in the USA, recent studies show that mass
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murder
of
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out
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raising
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among
the
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students in
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school when they killed
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thier
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their
classmate
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classmates
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without any
hesititaons
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hesitations
hesitation
. in
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,
while
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the benefits of
expoling
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expanding
the
internet
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are that it allows
people
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to learn
now
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new
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things and easy to communicate
in
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around
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the globe, the drawbacks are the costs of
the
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apply
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people
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people's
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addictions and increasing
pronography
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pornography
and valunarbilty between
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users
uses
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