Despite health warning, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. why should we be concerned about this? what solution would you suggest? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that a multitude

people

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of people

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are indulged to smoking

cigarettes

even

this

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is a warning of

health

. Smoking is a detrimental habit it brings multifarious diseases to the population. There are some measures to handle

this

particular problem. A

further

explanation will be presented in

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essay. To commence with smoking is injurious to

health

, so we should be addressed because

cigarettes

contains

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nicotaine

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nicotine

and it will provide numerous

health

issues

such

as lung cancer, a fatal disease and respiratory trouble.

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example

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smoking not only affects active

smokers

but

also

affects passive

smokers

along with

lung cancer is affected enormously

to

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second-hand

smokers

due to

inhale

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nictotine

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nicotine

by active

smokers

.

This

is because these days, people suffer stress and

work-load

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, so they need to be relaxed by smoking.

Then

smoking causes plenty of

health

issues, so we should

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concern

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and address

this

problem.

However

, there are some measures to handle

this

adverse situation. De-addiction

centers

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are opened by the government

as well as

the

rulling

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ruling

party should increase duty and tax on nicotine products, and

as a result

, purchasing ratio of

cigarettes

might be reduced.

For instance

, in Australia,

cigarette's

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cigarette

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price

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are expensive because of

heavy duty

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and tax on nicotine products.

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, the government should

be banned

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advertisements on

cigarettes

, when people do not

provake

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provoke

to buy

cigarettes

by

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through

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advertisements

while

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inhabitant's

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inhabitants'

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smoking habit may be diminished.

In other words

, stress-free work is promoted

from

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the

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apply

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corporate companies and workers feel

freely

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to

be worked

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in the

working place

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. In conclusion,

although

warning

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warnings

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of

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about

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smoking- are indulged to use

to

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apply

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around the world.

Cigarettes

contain nicotine, so it provides numerous

health

issues to the public who constantly smokes.

Eventhough

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Even though

, there are some actions to mitigate

this

issue like de-addiction

centers

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are

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being

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opened and imposing

heavy

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tax

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taxes

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on these products.