The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts how much money
earned
by American families during twelve months Add a missing verb
was earned
by
the Change preposition
in
year
2007, 2011 and 2015.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, the number of households who made money between $75,000 and $99,999 were
the lowest in 2007, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
while
the figure for highest earning
families Correct your spelling
highest-earning
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
were
the largest. During the years, both groups of people who had the least and the most money had some fluctuations.
Looking at the diagram in more Correct subject-verb agreement
was
details
, in 2007, there were nearly 30 Fix the agreement mistake
detail
million
of
parents in the USA Change preposition
apply
had
more than $100,000 salary, Correct pronoun usage
who had
however
, they declined to about 28 million
in the last
four years. After that, they bounced back to around 34 million
, which still
the most people in four categories. As for figures for the income group Add a missing verb
is still
which
less than $25,000 was close to the next level, differing merelyCorrect pronoun usage
apply
2
to 1 Change preposition
by 2
million
from 2007 to 2015.
The number of American citizens who owned the
rewards between $50,0000 and $74,999 Correct article usage
apply
remain
Wrong verb form
remained
steadily
at almost 21 Change the word
steady
million
, which had similar
trend to the earnings group of $75,000 and $99,999.Add an article
a similar
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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