The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph illustrates the information on the entertainment people watched during the day in the year 1992, which are the radio and television. The data is given in percentages and it can be split into two fluctuation lines, upward and downward trends. In general, it is obvious to see that both of the graphs stood at different levels but ended up in almost the same position.
First of all, the data fluctuated during the day. The data of the Television began at zero. From 6:00 am to 8:00 am, the line increased slightly for about 5%. and
then
dropped down in the next hour. Linking Words
Moreover
, they tended to skyrocket from 5% to reach above 50% from 11:00 am. to 8:00 pm. Linking Words
Additionally
, in the next following hour, it plummeted from the highest to the lowest by 2%, Linking Words
then
it remain stabilized untill the end.
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In contrast
, the startistic for the radio version began at less than 10% in the morning , and Linking Words
then
surged sharply to accounting for 25%. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the graph claimed down gradually since late morning to after midnight. Linking Words
Lastly
, they started to sour a little bit up Linking Words
at the end
merely 3%.Linking Words
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