Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebra;ng New Year in different countries. Write a le@er to your friend. In your letter • say how important New Year is to people in your country • describe how New Year is celebrated in your country • explain what you like about New Year celebra;ons in your country
Dear John,
I hope you’re well. I thought you might be interested to hear
know
that Verb problem
apply
give
a new college project about celebra>Wrong verb form
giving
ong
New Correct your spelling
the
Year
in different countries and I congratulate you on this
and wish you success. In this
leBer
I want to Correct your spelling
leber
told
you about a celebra>ong New Change the verb
tell
Year
in Iran, we call Noruz.
Noruz begins with spring
season and all of Add an article
the spring
companies
and Correct article usage
the companies
organiza>ons be
closed Verb problem
organisations are
expert
hospitals and emergency Change preposition
to expert
organiza>ons
. People go Correct your spelling
organisations
to
Change preposition
on
Correct article usage
a trip
trip
and own ci>es and congratulate together, they see and visit together and elders of Fix the agreement mistake
trips
family
like grandfathers and moms give to children some giG like Correct article usage
the family
colored
eggs, money and Change the spelling
coloured
host
welcomes the guests with nuts and sweets.
Every new Correct article usage
the host
year
I think about events that happened in
Change preposition
apply
last
year
and make planning
for Fix the agreement mistake
plans
new
Add an article
the new
a new
year
to
how I can improve myself and my skills Change preposition
apply
for
make a new life Change preposition
to
and
what are my weaknesses and how can I fix themCorrect word choice
apply
?
Once again, thank you for asking me I hope that Change the punctuation
.
helpful
Best wishes,
AliAdd a missing verb
is helpful
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logical structure
To enhance the logical structure of your letter, consider organizing your paragraphs more clearly around each topic you're discussing. Begin with an introduction, then address each bullet point in a separate paragraph, and conclude with a closing statement.
greeting and closing
Your greeting is appropriate, but your closing could be more formal or connected to the content of the letter. Consider using a conclusion that summarizes your main points or offers a final thought on the topic.
single idea per paragraph
You've done well in dedicating paragraphs to different topics; maintain this approach but ensure each paragraph is more focused and develops a single idea more thoroughly.
complete response
To fully respond to the task, make sure to address all bullet points in the prompt clearly. Expand your explanation on the importance of New Year in your country and emphasize specific celebration details and your personal thoughts.
suitable writing tone
The tone of your writing is suitable for communicating with a friend. However, strive for consistency in tone throughout the letter. Also, pay attention to using formal language appropriately, even in a semi-formal or informal letter, and avoid informal abbreviations or colloquial expressions.