The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The Diagram
displays
us the Revolution of owing Things that Verb problem
shows
works
on electricity and Change the verb form
work
number
of Hours in House to Correct article usage
the number
done
their work in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Change the form of the verb
do
Overall
, In 1920 almost no one has
Wrong verb form
had
Refrigerator
in their house and a Correct article usage
a Refrigerator
dramatically
rise Change the word
dramatic
the
number of refrigerators from 0 Change preposition
in the
percentage
to about 55 Replace the word
per cent
percent
in 1940 and Change the spelling
per cent
then
again increase
the percentage about 90 Wrong verb form
increased
percent
in 1960 and 100 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2019. Change the spelling
per cent
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