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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are required to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Owing to the sharp increase in population in the previous century and the move towards industrialization in both developed and developing countries, more waste has been produced by not only the factories but
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 the households. It is considered that a law must be legislated by the officials in charge of
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 so that recycling domestic trash will be maximized. Below, my reasons for agreeing with the above-mentioned statement are explained.
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 almost every item which is purchased in
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 day and age comes wrapped in paper or plastic material, the amount of waste from homes is constantly on the rise.
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 of bottles and cartons of juice, when the liquid inside is drunk, what is left will be thrown away as garbage. The pricey laborious process of recycling will;
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, be necessary. In the presence of rules and regulations;
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, people will be forced to separate the produced waste based on its primary material in order to facilitate recycling.
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, reusing the initial material of
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recycled objects
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 as rubber, wood, and
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 wool will remarkably reduce the need for rare things as the main and basic stuff for fabricating products. As long as it is imperative that people, even by being fined, contribute to
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 vital and earth-saving activity, recycling will be carried out sufficiently.
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, I once again reaffirm that I am strongly in
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 of imposing some restrictions regarding recycling in order that the process reaches its maximum and ideal amount since it will be
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benefit
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both people and the environment.

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Make sure your essay directly addresses all parts of the task. Your introduction should clearly state your position on the necessity of laws for recycling, and each paragraph should support this stance with relevant examples and analysis.
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Improve the clarity and comprehensiveness of your ideas by further developing your arguments with more detailed examples and explanations. This will strengthen your position and make your reasoning clearer to the reader.
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Include more varied and specific examples to support your main points. This will enhance your argument's persuasiveness and demonstrate a wider knowledge of the topic.
coherence and cohesion
Organize your essay with clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the topic. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, topic sentences) effectively to link your ideas and paragraphs together smoothly.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure your essay has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The introduction should outline your main arguments, the body should develop these arguments with supporting details, and the conclusion should summarize your views effectively.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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