The pie charts below show information on the highest level of education of women in Someland in 1945 and 1995
The 2 pie charts depict data
of
the highest level of women’s formal Change preposition
on
education
in Someland in 1945 and five decades later.
Overall
, it is obvious that third grade
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third-grade
education
and post graduate
were the highest in 1945. Add a hyphen
post-graduate
In contrast
, after fifty years, the percentage of first degree
study Add a hyphen
first-degree
program
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programs
becam
the highest rate.
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became
According to
the pie chart in 1945, over one
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one-third
third
of the chart is third grade
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third-grade
education
. Moreover
, the ratio of post graduate
was similar to Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
those
of Correct determiner usage
that
third
grade with 35%. Nevertheless
, the rate of first degree
level was the lowest with only 1%. Add a hyphen
first-degree
In addition
, year
6, year
9 and year
12 education
were 15%, 10%, 4
% respectively.
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and 4
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the information Remove the preposition
apply
in
50 years later, the first degree level increased dramatically and became the biggest with 50%. On top of that, the Change preposition
apply
year
12 and post graduate
academic performances were 20%. Add a hyphen
post-graduate
Last
but not least, the rest of the chart was the data of
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for
year
9 education
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