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The pie charts below show information on the highest level of education of women in Someland in 1945 and 1995

The pie charts below show information on the highest level of education of women in Someland in 1945 and 1995
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The 2 pie charts depict data
of
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 the highest level of women’s formal
education
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 in Someland in 1945 and five decades later.
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, it is obvious that
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third grade
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education
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 and
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 were the highest in 1945.
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, after fifty years, the percentage of
first degree
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 study
program
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programs
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becam
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became
 the highest rate.
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 the pie chart in 1945, over
one
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third
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 of the chart is
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third grade
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third-grade
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education
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.
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, the ratio of post
graduate
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 was similar to
those
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 of
third
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 grade with 35%.
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, the rate of
first degree
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 level was the lowest with only 1%.
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,
year
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 6,
year
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 9 and
year
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 12
education
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 were 15%, 10%,
4
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% respectively. Regarding
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the information
in
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50 years later, the first degree level increased dramatically and became the biggest with 50%. On top of that, the
year
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 12 and
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 academic performances were 20%.
Last
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 but not least, the rest of the chart was the data
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year
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education
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