The graph below shows the number of people taking part in four kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.
The line graph shows how many thousands of
people
took part in basketball
, tennis, badminton
, and rugby
in a certain area from 1985 and 2005. Overall
, the number
of people
engaging in basketball
and badminton
as a sport
activity remained almost unchanged, Change the noun form
sports
while
it is clear that
the number
of rugby
fans reduced dramatically.
Looking at the data, in 1985 the number
of participants
who played rugby
was the highest, with nearly 250 thousand
people
. It was the point when it started falling down and accounted for 200 thousand
participants
playing rugby
in 1995. During the next decade
it experienced a dramatic downward trend, with the Add a comma
decade,
number
of participants
dropping to 50 thousand
in 2005. In terms of tennis, the figures increased steadily, starting from 150 thousand
athletes. This
number
grew until it had more than 200 thousand
people
taking part in this
game at the end
of the period (2005).
However
, the remaining two sports had nearly the same number
of people
participating. The initial figure of
Change preposition
for
badminton
was around 50 thousand
individuals. In contrast
, basketball
, which attracted about 75 thousand
participants
in 1985. Throughout the period, the participation levels in badminton
and basketball
remained relatively similar.Submitted by Shaxnoza on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, basketball, badminton, rugby, number, participants, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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