The graph below shows the number of people taking part in four kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.
The line graph shows how many thousands of
people
took part in Use synonyms
basketball
, tennis, Use synonyms
badminton
, and Use synonyms
rugby
in a certain area from 1985 and 2005. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
engaging in Use synonyms
basketball
and Use synonyms
badminton
as a Use synonyms
sport
activity remained almost unchanged, Change the noun form
sports
while
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it is clear that
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
rugby
fans reduced dramatically.
Looking at the data, in 1985 the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
participants
who played Use synonyms
rugby
was the highest, with nearly 250 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
people
. It was the point when it started falling down and accounted for 200 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
participants
playing Use synonyms
rugby
in 1995. During the next Use synonyms
decade
it experienced a dramatic downward trend, with the Add a comma
decade,
number
of Use synonyms
participants
dropping to 50 Use synonyms
thousand
in 2005. In terms of tennis, the figures increased steadily, starting from 150 Use synonyms
thousand
athletes. Use synonyms
This
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number
grew until it had more than 200 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
people
taking part in Use synonyms
this
game Linking Words
at the end
of the period (2005).
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However
, the remaining two sports had nearly the same Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
participating. The initial figure Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
for
badminton
was around 50 Use synonyms
thousand
individuals. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
basketball
, which attracted about 75 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
participants
in 1985. Throughout the period, the participation levels in Use synonyms
badminton
and Use synonyms
basketball
remained relatively similar.Use synonyms
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