You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain the important event Apologise for the solution Suggest a new arrangement
Dear Dilshod,
I am writing
this
letter with the purpose of apology of
changing the dates of the visit. The main reason why I am writing Change preposition
for
this
letter was being play
volleyball in my house at that moment and I broke my window in Change the verb form
was being played
was playing
south
part of my home .
I Add an article
the south
would
Wrong verb form
will
say
you about breaking the window's history. I had gone to Verb problem
tell
the
work by my car and Correct article usage
apply
roads
became too bad the traffic jam. Correct article usage
the roads
As a result
, I was late for job
and my boss was annoyed by me. Correct pronoun usage
my job
Then
my manager speak
very loud sound to me Change the verb form
speaks
for
late. I began to work in my office. After I finished the Change preposition
apply
works
and I left my workplace. Fix the agreement mistake
work
In other words
, I also
was annoyed by my boss. I arrived at my home and played volleyball to be
out of Verb problem
apply
angry
. At that time, I broke my windows and I apologise for Replace the word
anger
this
solution. I offer you will arrange to visit next week. Because of this
, I fix
my house and I hope you won't be sad Wrong verb form
have fixed
for
Change preposition
about
this
condition. I look forward to Change the verb form
waiting
wait
you.
Best wishes,
AsilbekAdd the preposition
wait for
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Task Achievement
For a better task response, ensure that the letter clearly addresses all parts of the prompt. Include detailed explanations about the important event causing the change of plans, offer a sincere apology, and propose a specific new arrangement. Consider adding more details about the new proposed dates and how this change will be beneficial or more convenient for your friend.
Coherence & Cohesion
Improve coherence and cohesion by organizing your ideas more logically. Each paragraph should focus on a single aspect of the letter: 1) Explanation of the event, 2) Apology, 3) New arrangement. Use transitional phrases to smoothly guide the reader from one idea to the next.
Coherence & Cohesion
Revise your letter to include a proper greeting and closing to meet the conventions of letter writing. Although you've begun with 'Dear Dilshod,' and ended with 'Best wishes, Asilbek,' there's room for more warmth and personalization in these sections.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.