Many countries have embraced tourisma as a way to boost their economies and create jobs for local residents. However, some argue that tourism can have negative impacts on the environment and local cultures. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism for a country?
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Tourism
in many countries have
grown for several years and Correct subject-verb agreement
has
this
is as
a great way to develop their nation's economies, Change preposition
apply
whereas
some believe that it can damage local cultures and the environment. While
there are some advantages
of this
, I believe that negatives should be taken into account.
On the one
hand, there several
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are several
advantages
of tourism
. One
of the main advantages
can provide a popular leisure activity and people enrich experience
with travelling opens our minds. If you have some ideas. Add an article
the experience
For example
, you can see different animals, Correct word choice
and landscape
landscape
and visit Fix the agreement mistake
landscapes
to
special Change preposition
apply
place
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places
such
as mountain
, Fix the agreement mistake
mountains
beach
, Fix the agreement mistake
beaches
overseas
. Correct word choice
and overseas
Moreover
, you may be able to go to the museum and begin the growth of your mind.
On the other hand
, although
mentioned positives, there are several disadvantages of tourism
. One
of the major disadvantages of it is that tourism
can have a
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apply
negatives
effects on the natural environment. Change the noun form
negative
For instance
, tourists may be damaged
local sites Wrong verb form
damage
with
rubbing Change preposition
by
of
different things. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, one
of the most
major negatives is that our local cultures are affected by tourists.
In conclusion, I believe that there are several benefits of Correct quantifier usage
apply
tourism
. However
,Correct article usage
the
advantages
of this
may be able to outweigh the disadvantages. In other words
, government
should develop Add an article
the government
tourism
as a
income source to improve financial problems. Change the article
an
Nonetheless
, government
do not have to harm to natural environment and local cultures.Correct article usage
the government
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Grammar and Clarity
Carefully proofread for grammatical errors and to ensure clarity in your sentences. For example, "Tourism in many countries have grown" should be "Tourism in many countries has grown".
Vocabulary
Try to use a wider range of vocabulary to avoid repetition and make your essay more engaging. For example, instead of repeatedly using "negatives" or "advantages", you could use synonyms like "drawbacks," "benefits," or "downsides".
Structure
Ensure your essay follows a clear structure. While you have an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion, some paragraphs seem to mix advantages and disadvantages. Try to keep each paragraph focused on a single topic for better clarity.
Supporting Examples
Support your points with more specific examples and details. For instance, instead of saying "tourists may be damaged local sites," provide a specific example of a place where this has happened and explain the consequences.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.