You arranged to visit a friend in Canada an but amportant event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Writing a letter to your friend. In you letter. Explain the important event Apologize for the situation Suggest a new arrangement
Dear John,
How are you
The reason why I am addressing you is I am sorry my close friend.
Furthermore
, I am very regret
. I don't go to your Replace the word
regretful
at
home because I have one brother and Change preposition
apply
also
of
my Change preposition
apply
brother
wedding day next week. So, I don't to visit Change noun form
brother's
your
at home. Correct pronoun usage
you
Besides
that, I
love Correct pronoun usage
my
brother
Correct pronoun usage
my brother
also
extremely important Add a missing verb
is also
for
my Change preposition
in
live
Replace the word
life
this
day.
I am sorry my friend John. I know you very good boy and Change preposition
to this
also
you is
always Change the verb form
are
beautiful
boy Correct article usage
a beautiful
for
me. I believe we Change preposition
to
are
meet in the near future. I am sorry my close friend. I think might be interesting our days.
From one perspective, I go to your stunning at home and Verb problem
will
also
I visit to
in Canada 27 th January. If you want I go Remove the preposition
apply
other
days we Change preposition
on other
playing
football volleyball and Wrong verb form
can play
another sport
. I suggest Fix the agreement mistake
other sports
other
Fix the agreement mistake
others
playing
or we go to Replace the word
play
dancing
club. In conclusion, our time Add an article
the dancing
a dancing
well
be extremely enjoyable for both of us.
I am looking forward to your answer.
Best wishes,
TomCorrect your spelling
will
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Coherence and Cohesion
Focus on creating clear paragraphs, each dedicated to one idea. Develop your ideas more fully, using examples or explanations where possible to add depth to your letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
Foster a more logical flow of ideas by connecting sentences and paragraphs seamlessly. Use linking phrases such as 'Firstly,' 'In addition,' or 'Therefore,' to guide the reader smoothly through your letter.
Task Achievement
To improve task response, ensure you address all parts of the prompt clearly and directly. Firstly, explain the event in more detail, and directly apologize for the need to change plans. Then, outline a concrete new arrangement, suggesting specific dates or alternative plans.
Task Achievement
Adopt a consistent and suitable tone throughout your letter. Consider the context – writing to a friend about rescheduling a visit – and choose language and expressions that reflect this scenario appropriately. Avoid overly formal or casual expressions that do not fit the situation.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite