The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table presents the aggregate count of visitors to the Ashdown Museum,
whereas
the two pie charts depict the outcomes of a visitor satisfaction survey conducted prior to and subsequent to the refurbishment.
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, after the renovations were concluded, the number of visitors to the Ashdown Museum increased by 18,000, from 74,000 prior to the event to 92,000. The pie charts illustrate that approximately 40% of the population's comments transition from discontent to contentment.
The percentage of the audience that was extremely content increased significantly following the renovation, from 15% to 35%. Despite the fact that the percentage of individuals who are not satisfied or extremely dissatisfied remains unchanged at 5%, the proportion of dissatisfied and extremely dissatisfied individuals decreases from half of the population to one-fifth of the total following the refurbishment, from 45% to 75%.Linking Words
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