Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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contemporary times, most juveniles prefer to

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on social media rather than hang out

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other. There are various factors that

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fact certainly adults should be

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awarded

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solve

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. In fact, there are many approaches

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be utilized and will be discussed

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essay. On the one hand, technological advancement has changed

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behavior

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especially

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children.

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in their

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, students use

internet

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for their daily lessons,

for example

using email to communicate with their teachers

that

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to send their home

works

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.

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automatically introducing social

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networks

network

among the pupils.

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, after

school

, they will spend their time without

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their parents

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parents

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observations

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causing

parents

's daily working time.

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,

this

could make the youths

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their time in front of

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for

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playing games or social media browsing. The ease of online activity

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people more introverted and less interested

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in talking

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each

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other immediately.

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problem,

parents

should make

a strict decisions

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by limiting access and using their

smart phone

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through

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making

their

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busy with children's

activity

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like

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courses

out side

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school

or joining them

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school

camp

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or

voluntaries

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activities.

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among

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their

neighborhoods

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and influencing them to

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at

garden

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the garden

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park

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to raise their social well-being. In conclusion, children's

habit forming

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habit-forming

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behavior

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behaviour

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are

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is

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shaping

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through

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by

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their daily activities in their schools

as well as

their homes.

Parents

have

vital

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role

providing

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many approaches to solve

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fact by making several rules

in

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among their family members and taking care

their

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of their

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childrens

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children

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more.