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The bar charts below give information on road transport in a number of European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below give information on road transport in a number of European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts show road traffic figures for several European countries including
Denmark
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, France, Italy, Great Britain, Germany and Spain,
as well as
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 the European average in
kilometers
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kilometres
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 per year and miles per day.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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Denmark
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 has the highest figure of car km per
person
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 - over 12.000
kilometers
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kilometres
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 per year
while
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 the EU average is 10.000
kilometers
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kilometres
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. In
Denmark
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, the average
number
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 of journeys per
person
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 by bus, train, metro and bicycle is 3.000 which is higher than the European average of around 1.000. The United Kingdom has the highest commuting time by all modes of transport at 45 minutes per day,
then
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 as the average figure for the Eurozone is 30 minutes. It is worth noting that
Denmark
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 has the highest
number
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 of trips compared to other countries. In general, data are provided on the
number
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 of trips per
person
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 by private car, the
number
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 of trips per
person
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 by bus, train, metro and bicycle,
as well as
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 the travel time by all modes of transport in both directions.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words denmark, person, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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