The bar charts below give information on road transport in a number of European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below give information on road transport in a number of European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts provide information on modes of travel and travel times for six European countries,
as well as
the average for the European Union. The charts demonstrate that car usage is highest in Denmark, at around 12,500 kilometres per person per year, and lowest in Spain and Germany. Perhaps surprisingly, the Danes
also
make much more use of alternative transport than people in other countries, travelling more than 3,000 kilometres a year by bus, tram, metro or bicycle, more than double the EU average.
By comparison
, the British and French cover less than a third of
this
distance by public transport. In terms of commuting time, British drivers spend around 47 minutes each day travelling to work, more than any other country.
On the other hand
, in Denmark and Italy, where many more people use public transport, the commute distances are much shorter. Translated with DeepL.com (free version)
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