Some people think that the generation X ( people between 1997 and 2007) are more dishonest than the previous generations. Why does this happen? Is it a negative or positive development for the society?

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X dishonesty is reported to be worse than the previous ones. The primary reason for people being dishonest is the lack of responsibility. In light of
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. A salient point that needs to be considered is that people of
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X tend to be irresponsible.
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the fact that in their childhood, most parents usually pampered them or even did not teach them to
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for their mistakes.
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, in turn, may lead to a bad habit for their children and when they grow up, they will tend to blame themselves on others in order to avoid responsibility
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not to be reprimanded.
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,
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tendency could have a negative consequence in terms of the following
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with their
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. It should be self-evident that individuals often mimic each other and it is true for later
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, when future
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observe the previous ones commit
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as robbers or felons but these criminals were not punished or held accountable for their
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, these situations will increase the rate of social evils or offenders in the future as the later
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will suppose that they can avoid responsibility by lying and denying their
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like previous
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did.
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X are more dishonest than the older is
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irresponsibility.
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,
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has a negative influence on later
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