The bar graph below shows the consumption of natural gas world wide from 1950 to 1990.

The bar graph below shows the consumption of natural gas world wide from 1950 to 1990.
The chart illustrates how much natural
gas
was consumed worldwide between 1950 and 1990. As clearly seen from the chart, Indonesia had by far the greatest natural
gas
consumption
, with the figures fluctuating between about 17,000 and 20,000
units
. Malaysia and France
also
had a constant level of
consumption
,
although
the figure for Malaysia was higher than that for France (13,000
units
compared to approximately 11,000
units
respectively).
However
, over the forty-year period, the amount of natural
gas
consumed in Australia decreased significantly from 15,000
units
to 5,000
units
.
In contrast
, Spain experienced the greatest increase, doubling from only 8,000 to about 17,000
units
. The
consumption
in Japan
also
had an upward trend. The country consumed just below 5,000
units
of natural
gas
at the beginning of the period
,
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and was consuming over 11,000
units
by the year 1990.
Overall
, natural
gas
consumption
tended to rise or
remained
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stable over the entire period, with the exception of Australia.
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