The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age.

The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age.
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The bar chart compares the proportion of five reasons why adults between 20 and 50 years of age go to
exercise
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whereas
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the pie one illustrates four locations where people
exercise
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.
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, what stands out from the diagrams is that a considerable number of adults do workout as a recreational activity.
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, most people opt to
exercise
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in gyms. With regard to the first graph,
it is clear that
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recreation and muscle toning are recorded as the most significant aims for
exercise
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objectives, with 40% and 25% respectively,
however
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, the purpose of mood improvement ranks
last
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with 10%. There is little difference between the share of the aims of disease prevention and weight loss, as the former accounts for nearly 15%,
while
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the latter is lower by a margin of roughly 3%. Focusing shift to the second one, it is apparent that more adults go to gyms to do
exercise
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which makes up 35% of the total share.
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, that in playgrounds and public sports venues stand
last
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with altogether 30%. When it comes to parks, they account for 20% of the general percentage, and the remaining 15% of people tend to go to a variety of other public places.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words exercise with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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