Some cities have vehicle- free days when private cars, trucks, and motorcycles are banned from the city center. public transportation like buses , taxis, and metros are advised. To what extend do you think the advantaged of the policy outweigh the disadvantages?
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Nowadays,
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the numbers
numbers
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number
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are
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is
particularly
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, some companies Linking Words
governments
have Correct word choice
and governments
got
a decision to ban private Verb problem
made
cars
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in
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on
such
as weekends or special hours. Linking Words
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, there are some positive or negative effects Linking Words
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transports
is more beneficial than drawbacks .
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city
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the city
center
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centre
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some days Change preposition
on
that
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the sales of
cars
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transports
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vehicles
, it would fall in selling Use synonyms
cars
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loss
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a loss
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, in 2018, Toyota industry company fired some Linking Words
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of its
employers
in Switzerland. Correct your spelling
employees
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vehicles
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in
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on
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vehicles
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, the business company made Linking Words
loss
in their trading and obligated its workers to fire.
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a loss
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, the important positive impact of banning private Linking Words
vehicles
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is that
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noise
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generally
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general
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city
lifestyle is full of loud and high Correct article usage
the city
voice
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voices
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, people who are living in Linking Words
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city
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the city
unhappy
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are unhappy
from
it. Meanwhile, if Change preposition
with
government
do not allow using private Add an article
the government
vehicles
, it would have a decline Use synonyms
of
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in
get
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apply
quite
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quiet
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is dues to satisface locals in cities. Linking Words
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of citizens
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satisfied
in
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with
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a weekend
the weekend
weekend
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weekends
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,
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apply
ministry
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private Change the verb form
driving
cars
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in
weekends. Change preposition
at
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lifestyle
were spread in urban Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
center
and gave enjoyment away from high sounds . Fix the agreement mistake
centers
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cause to have a fall pollution in Add a missing verb
is that
city
environments. In fact, a lot of transport Use synonyms
are
damaged Change the verb form
is
to
weather and environment likely Change preposition
by
pullotion
. Correct your spelling
pollution
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, it is able to solve it by banning some of Linking Words
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transports
.
In conclusion, there are so many Add an article
the transports
benefit
and damage impacts of banning private Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
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transports
in Fix the agreement mistake
transport
urab
areas. Correct your spelling
urban
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the
reasons mentioned above it seems that banning them Change preposition
for the
is
more positive influences than Verb problem
has
its
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apply
harms
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harm
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