A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at University. He or she has asked for your advice about studying this subject write a letter to your friend in your letter? •give details of the course you took at the University •explain why you recommend the university • give some advice about how to apply
Dear Rahul,
I hope you are living a healthy life. I received a letter from your side, I am extremely happy to know you are
also
joining the same course which I completed. Firstly
, the name of the course is Bachelor of Engineering in the IT stream. Nowadays, this
course is more beneficial since in our country a plethora of job opportunities. In the upcoming year in India, there a numerous amount of companies that will be established. So, this
is a good time to start this
.
I am very happy to recommend the name of the renowned university 'Maharshi Dayanand University' which is located in the centre of Rohtak Which is the border of our capital 'New Delhi'. The facilities of this
institute are not only helpful but also
highly professional and they assist the average students. Nevertheless
, the environment of this
institute is really reliable.
Moreover
, the best way to apply online is because they don't take any physical documents and most probably the admission will open in the first week of July month.
My good wishes are always with you and will succeed in your life.
Warm wish,
HarmanjotSubmitted by harmanjotdhindsa on
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structure
Ensure that each paragraph focuses distinctly on a separate aspect of the topic. The structure of your letter is mostly logical, but sometimes ideas can blend into each other. Separate paragraphs for course details, university recommendation, and application advice can enhance clarity.
cohesion
Use transitional phrases to improve flow between sentences and paragraphs, enhancing the letter's readability.
detailing
Provide more specific examples or experiences to strengthen your recommendation of the university and course. Detailing unique features or personal experiences can significantly enrich your letter.
tone
Maintain a balance between formal and friendly tones. The letter should remain approachable yet professional, especially when giving advice and recommendations.
grammar
Review and correct any grammatical errors, particularly with verb tenses and prepositions, to improve the overall quality of writing.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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