Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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amount of individuals believe that a lot of
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from different countries,
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events by using social
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. The author agrees with the advantages that social networking brings for
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and will discuss the advantages
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the disadvantages in
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essay. In the new era of technology, social
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plays an important
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and getting news. First of all,
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other continents even though they stay
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a distance.
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to border their
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about various
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all over the
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world

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such
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or entertainment thanks to the conveniences of social
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, social networking appears as
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to help
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explore and border
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savvy about
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that
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do not have abilities to reach
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for the benefits of
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social
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media
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is connection. Social
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help
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to make friends and connect with global citizens who come from different countries with
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cultures ,
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many opportunities to improve their English skills, border their
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cultures,
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. Not only improve your
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, but it
also
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many relationships.
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, using social
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also
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have their
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clear drawbacks that
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need to notice,
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much of your time on
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social networking will lead to many consequences
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eyesite
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and neuron system. Despite the benefits
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social applications,
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reed to aleart that social
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causes addiction and may become the main reason
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. In conclusion, social
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have their own pros and cons.It will help you to connect with
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latest
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news with fast speed.
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,Social networking can become the main reasons that lead to many dangerous health issues, From the
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point of view, social
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will bring
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in
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era huge advantages
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on how you
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using
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • facilitate
  • geographically separated
  • fostering
  • connectivity
  • instant communication
  • real-time information
  • misinformation
  • rigorous checks and balances
  • fake news
  • addictive nature
  • detract
  • face-to-face interactions
  • mental health
  • awareness of limitations
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