The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age.

The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age.
The charts give information about the survey which adult's primary exercise targets and the places where people go there to do physical activities between 20 and 50 years of age.
Overall
,
it is clear that
40% of people do sports for recreation, which is the highest of the five different aims
while
improving mood is the lowest rate at 10%.
To begin
with, people prefer to work out at the gym, which was approximately 35%;
however
, there is only 25% for muscle toning, which was lower than the target for amusement at 15% accidentally.
In addition
, the second choice which individuals exercise is the park, which means they like to breathe the fresh air rather than staying in the indoor space.
Moreover
, the percentage of losing weight and preventing diseases is lower than 15%, which is at 14% and 11% respectively. The locations where youngsters keep their fitness are playgrounds, public sports venues and other places and all of them are 15%.
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