Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes, is one of the most widely-used drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long-term health costs are high – both for smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of healthcare costs and lower productivity. Do governments have a legitimate role to legislate to protect citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to the individual?

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yet it remains the top legally consumed drug in the world.

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the perspectives about smoking regulations vary widely, I agree that

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should be subjected to a firm regulatory overweight by

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, the main reason for strict legislation lies in the necessity to protect

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harmful effects. Individuals who are heavy smokers not only damage their

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affect the

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of young

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and categories at risk; passive smoke and other compounds that are released by smoking have been shown to increase the probability of lung cancer, not only to the direct

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to

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who live in close contact with them.

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, nations with prominent welfare policies are facing the consequences of smoking, through increased healthcare costs; given

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have the moral imperative to protect all

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citizens from

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individuals from a heavy addiction which again

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and life balance.

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reduces the productivity of

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who depend on it and should be treated as a drug and, in several cases,

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prohibited. Notably, countries

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as Italy and England, are in the stage of banning

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production to protect

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from addictions and

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has shown to be a wise decision for the nations that have relieved their inner issues. In conclusion, I agree that

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should regulate the use of

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the potential

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issues that it causes and its addictive properties. I recommend nations

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adopt an aggressive strategy to prevent

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from abusing

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that it may cause to

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