The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
The bar chart gives a detailed illustration of the number of social media spots used by men and women in Canada in the years 2014 and 2015. These figures are stated in percentages.
Overall
, it is evident that those who employed the usage of just one site recorded the highest rate whearas
those who used five were the least within the Correct your spelling
whereas
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period of the study.
In the year
2014, Canadians who used just a space on social networks were the highest, with a rate of 36% followed by those who used two sites with a proportion of 23%. However
, 2% of people used used
five network locations, Remove the redundancy
apply
whereas
more than 50% of this
(5%) also
had four networks.
A year
after
this
, there was a drop in the number of citizens in Canada who used just one media place by 8% (28%) and also
a percentage drop of
those who didn't use any space at all. Change preposition
in
By contrast
, all others increased with nationals who used three various sites showing the highest increase in rate of 4%, which was 16% in the year
2015.Submitted by maameserwaamilli on
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