8/1 The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.

8/1 The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.
The line graph illustrates how many
people
are visiting the
museum
in
UK
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and how they were influenced by the time and
also
the seasons in 2005.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that most
of
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the
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people
choose the warm season to
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the
museum
instead
of winter. During the summer, most of the
people
choose to visit the
museum
at 11 o'
clock
, around 1300
people
, but the highest level on
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can be seen at 12 o'
clock
, when the number of
people
is over 1400, with a decline for the next hours. Moving forward, the least
people
can be seen at 16:00 until 18:00, where the number of
people
starts from 800 and goes down by the
last
hour, to 0. In the winter time, 10 o'
clock
is the hour that
people
start to visit the
museum
, but the most crowded hours are 11 and 12 o'
clock
, starting from approximately 400 visitors, to around 600 next hour. From 12 am to 3 pm, the number of visitors is going down, only 200 peoples at 14:00 and 0 at 15:00. The most crowded hours is 12:00 o'
clock
for both seasons, but during the summer we can still see
people
in the
museum
until approximately 5:30 pm, when during the winter, at 3 pm the
museum
is already empty.
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