The chart shows the changes that took place in the different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012.

The given line chart illustrates three types of different crimes including

burglary

, car theft and robbery

took

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that took

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place

between 2003-2012

as well as

changes in the

crime

in the Newport city

center

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. The horizontal line describes

number

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a number

the number

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of

incidents

and

vertical

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the vertical

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line shows various years.

Overall

,

incidents

of

burglary

took

place

the most in 2003 and

at the end

of 10 years it comes to second highest.

Burglary

and car theft

incidents

fluctuated the most compared to robbery.

To begin

with , in the year 2003

burglary

incidents

took

place

the most as less than 3500

incidents

. Afterwards,

this

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crimes

rises

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in

number

in 2004 and

then

it dropped after that year to 2008 as only more than 1000

incidents

.

Further

,

number

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the number

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of

burglary

incidents

increased and decreased and in 2012 it came to less than 1500

incidents

.

Following

this

, robbery is the least committed

crime

. In 2003, there were more than 500

incidents

and

then

the graph

rises

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and dropped

down

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between 500 to 1000

number of

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incidents

and

at the end

of

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the decade

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decade

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decade,

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the

number

of

incidents

is

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still

same

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the same

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as

2003

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in 2003

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.

Lastly

, car theft

crime

started

as

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with

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less than 3000

incidents

and after fluctuating a lot

this

crimes

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crime

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became the highest committed

crime

in 2012 as more than 2500

incidents

took

place

.