The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

The bar chart shows information regarding the

number

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of

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and non-

residents

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car

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journeys towards

city

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the city

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centre from 1996 to 2005.

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, it can be seen that in the early five

years

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car

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journey

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were predominated by

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,

while

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since

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2000 to 2002

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mostly

non

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,

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three

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later the

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of

travel

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travelling

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of

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by

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car

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for

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and non-

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were

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nearly similar. Looking in more detail, the

number

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of

car

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travel for

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stood at almost 10000.

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, there was a steady decrease in 1997

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followed by a gradual growth and fall in 1998 and 1999 respectively. During

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five

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years

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the sum of travel

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predominated by

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residents

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journey

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.

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it was a significant drop

2000

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and continued

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at

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nearly

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stable position until 2002. From 1999 to 2000,

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was located in parking meters towards

centre

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the centre

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of the city. In the meantime,

non-

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residents

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visitors

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car

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journey

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began at 5000 and experienced a gradual growth

during

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over

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five

years

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.

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the

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of

car

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journey

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for non-origin folks was higher from 2000 to 2002. In

this

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time scale, the

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was almost 8000

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average. After that, between 2002 to 2003, there was

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about

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Westgate

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and Park Lane closure

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traffic matters.

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residents

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and

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car

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journey

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were nearly similar,

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there was a slight difference in quantity.