The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
The bar chart shows information regarding the
number
of residents
and non-residents
car
journeys towards city
centre from 1996 to 2005.
Add an article
the city
Overall
, it can be seen that in the early five years
car
journey
were predominated by Fix the agreement mistake
journeys
residents
, while
since
2000 to 2002 Change preposition
from
was
mostly Correct subject-verb agreement
were
non
Add a hyphen
non-residents
residents
, then
three years
later the number
of travel
Correct your spelling
travelling
of
Change preposition
by
car
for residents
and non-residents
were
nearly similar.
Looking in more detail, the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
number
of car
travel for residents
stood at almost 10000. Then
, there was a steady decrease in 1997 and
followed by a gradual growth and fall in 1998 and 1999 respectively. During Correct word choice
apply
this
five Correct determiner usage
these
years
the sum of travel Add a comma
years,
were
predominated by Change the verb form
was
residents
Change noun form
residents'
resident's
journey
. Fix the agreement mistake
journeys
Next,
it was a significant drop 2000
and continued Change preposition
in 2000
by
Change preposition
at
nearly
stable position until 2002. From 1999 to 2000, Correct article usage
a nearly
car
was located in parking meters towards Add an article
the car
centre
of the city.
In the meantime, Correct article usage
the centre
non-
Change the noun form
non-resident
residents
visitors
Change noun form
visitors'
visitor's
car
journey
began at 5000 and experienced a gradual growth during
five Change preposition
over
years
. Then
the number
of car
journey
for non-origin folks was higher from 2000 to 2002. In Fix the agreement mistake
journeys
this
time scale, the number
was almost 8000 in
average.
After that, between 2002 to 2003, there was Change preposition
on
policy
about Add an article
a policy
the
Westgate Correct article usage
apply
street
and Park Lane closure Capitalize word
Street
due to
traffic matters. Non-
Correct your spelling
Non-residents
residents
and residents
Change noun form
residents'
resident's
car
journey
were nearly similar, Fix the agreement mistake
journeys
although
there was a slight difference in quantity.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, residents, car, years, journey with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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