The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
The bar chart shows information regarding the
number
of
residents
and non-
residents
car
journeys towards
city
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the city
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centre from 1996 to 2005.
Overall
, it can be seen that in the early five
years
car
journey
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journeys
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were predominated by
residents
,
while
since
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from
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2000 to 2002
was
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were
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mostly
non
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non-residents
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residents
,
then
three
years
later the
number
of
travel
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travelling
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of
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by
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car
for
residents
and non-
residents
were
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was
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nearly similar. Looking in more detail, the
number
of
car
travel for
residents
stood at almost 10000.
Then
, there was a steady decrease in 1997
and
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followed by a gradual growth and fall in 1998 and 1999 respectively. During
this
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these
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five
years
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the sum of travel
were
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predominated by
residents
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residents'
resident's
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journey
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journeys
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.
Next,
it was a significant drop
2000
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in 2000
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and continued
by
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at
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nearly
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a nearly
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stable position until 2002. From 1999 to 2000,
car
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the car
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was located in parking meters towards
centre
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the centre
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of the city. In the meantime,
non-
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non-resident
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residents
visitors
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visitors'
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car
journey
began at 5000 and experienced a gradual growth
during
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over
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five
years
.
Then
the
number
of
car
journey
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journeys
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for non-origin folks was higher from 2000 to 2002. In
this
time scale, the
number
was almost 8000
in
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on
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average. After that, between 2002 to 2003, there was
policy
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a policy
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about
the
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Westgate
street
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and Park Lane closure
due to
traffic matters.
Non-
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Non-residents
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residents
and
residents
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residents'
resident's
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car
journey
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journeys
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were nearly similar,
although
there was a slight difference in quantity.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, residents, car, years, journey with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • residents
  • non-residents
  • urban planning
  • traffic management
  • regulate
  • measures
  • impact
  • increase
  • decrease
  • compare
  • explore
  • evaluate
  • potential
  • journey
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