The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014.
The graph demonstrates the fluctuations
of
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in
sales
in a bakery during a year.
Overall
, it presents the data of changes in sales
of the most main purchased items consist
of bread, buns, and pies for the year 2014.
The highest income is the Wrong verb form
consisting
sales
of bread which started in
80,000,000 $ Change preposition
at
on
January and after Change preposition
in
the
several significant reductions and Correct article usage
apply
rising
reached the same previous point Wrong verb form
rises
on
December. Change preposition
in
Also
, it can be seen that there is a slight increase in sales
of pies constantly from January to August, after the remaining 20,000,000 $ for three months, and it finally
at the end
of the year, with a dramatic growth finished in two times of January’s point.
In addition
, it is obvious that the pies sales
grew up
regularly for several months, Change preposition
apply
while
in the last
five months, we witnessed a remarkable drop-off.Submitted by TUTOO on
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