The chart below give the information about the percentage of the adults population who were overweight in four different countries in 1980,1990,2000

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percentage

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people who are over 18 and overweight in four different nations (Japan, Finland,

Australia

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and the US) between 1980 and 2000.

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owerweight

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overweight

population rose every year in every location. More overweight citizens lived in the United States, and the least consisted of Japanese people. The biggest jump in all

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in all countries was in

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. The

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of the US was higher than any other and rose around 10

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in 1990 and finished with around three

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. Japan showed a

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proportion in terms of the obese individuals living

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it increased a little in the final period, it was still well under 5% during the whole period given. Finland and

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both started at under 10% and showed a slight increase in 1990. The most significant change was in

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's figure, nearly doubling itself by jumping from just over 10% in 1990 to above 20% in 10 years. The biggest rise in all countries

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in 2000, and they all went up

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from their past numbers every year.