The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The line graph below illustrates the use of
fish
, chicken
, beef
and lamb
in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
It is clear that
in the first years using beef
was most popular among people while
in the last
years, chicken
was the most favorite food.
In 1979, each person used about 220 grams
of beef
per week while
only 60 grams
of fish
was consumed by people. Also
, the figures for using lamb
and chicken
were approximately the same about 150 grams
for each individual. 5 years later, the consumption of beef
and chicken
increased slightly and reached roughly 230 and 170 grams
respectively. While
,
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apply
lamb
and fish
decreased moderately and reached about 110 and 50 grams
respectively.
In 1994, the figures for chicken
rose significantly and reached about 220 grams
. Also
, the consumption of beef
after decreasing, grew and reached 170 grams
. The figures for Using fish
remained unchanged while
the popularity of lamb
declined and reached about 70 grams
. In 2004, the use of chicken
rose dramatically and reached over 250 grams
while
,
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apply
beef
and lamb
decreased and reached about 110 and 60 respectively and using fish
remained unchangedSubmitted by www.marzieh.eidi on
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