The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The line graph below illustrates the use of
fish
, Use synonyms
chicken
, Use synonyms
beef
and Use synonyms
lamb
in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Use synonyms
It is clear that
in the first years using Linking Words
beef
was most popular among people Use synonyms
while
in the Linking Words
last
years, Linking Words
chicken
was the most favorite food.
In 1979, each person used about 220 Use synonyms
grams
of Use synonyms
beef
per week Use synonyms
while
only 60 Linking Words
grams
of Use synonyms
fish
was consumed by people. Use synonyms
Also
, the figures for using Linking Words
lamb
and Use synonyms
chicken
were approximately the same about 150 Use synonyms
grams
for each individual. 5 years later, the consumption of Use synonyms
beef
and Use synonyms
chicken
increased slightly and reached roughly 230 and 170 Use synonyms
grams
respectively. Use synonyms
While
Linking Words
,
using of Remove the comma
apply
lamb
and Use synonyms
fish
decreased moderately and reached about 110 and 50 Use synonyms
grams
respectively.
In 1994, the figures for Use synonyms
chicken
rose significantly and reached about 220 Use synonyms
grams
. Use synonyms
Also
, the consumption of Linking Words
beef
after decreasing, grew and reached 170 Use synonyms
grams
. The figures for Using Use synonyms
fish
remained unchanged Use synonyms
while
the popularity of Linking Words
lamb
declined and reached about 70 Use synonyms
grams
. In 2004, the use of Use synonyms
chicken
rose dramatically and reached over 250 Use synonyms
grams
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
,
Remove the comma
apply
beef
and Use synonyms
lamb
decreased and reached about 110 and 60 respectively and using Use synonyms
fish
remained unchangedUse synonyms
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