You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • explain why you will be visiting the town • give details of where you will be staying • ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment.

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Dear Rahul, It's been a long time since we met. How's your new job? I think you must be missing your university and Kingston as that was the best time of your student life. I am visiting Kingston

this

weekend for a corporate meeting with some of my co-workers. Surprisingly, my company has arranged my stay for 2 days in a

hotel

near your university. Do you remember the Pacifica

Hotel

? You always used to show me that

hotel

in our calls and we decided to visit

this

hotel

atleast

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at least

once. I am eagerly waiting to visit

this

hotel

and city both with you as we had plans

since

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long ago. The meeting is only 2 hours long and I am in Kingston for two days so I'm looking for some places to visit in the evening and I'm sure you have good choices. Can you suggest some

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favourite places to hang out? Can't wait to see you. Your friend, Tirth

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Add more specifics about why you are visiting the town beyond the corporate meeting, if there's any personal excitement or anticipation to explore specific parts of the town, to better address the task prompt.

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Consider including more details about your planned stay like how you anticipate the experience at the Pacifica Hotel, to make your letter more engaging and personal.

coherence cohesion

Organize your ideas more clearly by separating information into distinct paragraphs with transitions. For instance, one paragraph can focus on your stay and excitement, while another discusses evening entertainment.

coherence cohesion

Connect your ideas using cohesive devices like 'Furthermore', 'In addition', 'As for', etc., to ensure a smoother flow of information and ideas.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to inform you that
I am excited to announce that
I have decided to visit the town where you went to university because
I have always been curious about the town, and I thought it would be a great opportunity to explore it
I have booked a room at a hotel called
I will be staying in the town from
I am wondering if you could recommend any
fun activities
entertainment options
popular places to visit
restaurants
bars
clubs
concert venues
I am particularly interested in
local live music performances
cultural events
art galleries
theater shows
I would greatly appreciate your suggestions
Thank you in advance for your help
I am looking forward to hearing from you

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You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • explain why you will be visiting the town • give details of where you will be staying • ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. Do you agree or disagree?

The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education so that they can at least read, write, and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some families want their child to learn at home instead of learn at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that art, such as paintings and music are a waste of money and and the government should spend this money on pubic service To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

What are the advantages and disadvantages of using social media? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.