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Band 5.5

You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter · give the details of the flight · explain what the problem with the food was · say what the airline should do about it. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir , I am writing
this
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 letter to express my deep
griveances
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grievances
grievance
 about the service that I got yesterday when I was travelling through your airline from India to Canada. My name is Jai Verma and I booked my ticket from your company in advance to avoid all the inconveniences , the flight number BMO 15434 flew from Amritsar airport at 10 pm and I got seat number 34 B . Everything was perfect like
seat
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the seat
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 was comfortable and
staff
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the staff
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 was helpful and enthusiastic .
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, I had a problem with my meal and I felt disappointed and dissatisfied. I am
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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 person
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that
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 is why , I ordered
meat free
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meat-free
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 meal during my travel but somehow, I didn't get
that
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my food
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, I was starving throughout my flight. I have medical issues
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 , my doctor gave me some medicine to tackle the problem because of not getting food I was unable to take my medicine. I request you to provide coaching to your crew to avoid
such
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 incidents, if someone
have
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fixed
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a fixed
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 meal plan
then
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 that will be their duty to provide them
exactly
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with exactly
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 what they are demanding. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jai

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coherence cohesion
Ensure you have a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion for better logical structure.
coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of your complaint to keep your ideas well organized and easy to follow.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate, which enhances the overall presentation of your letter.
task achievement
Fully address all parts of the task, including providing specific details about the flight, the issue encountered, and a clear request or suggestion for resolution.
task achievement
Maintain a formal yet polite tone, avoiding overly casual language to ensure your letter is appropriately professional.
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