You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter · give the details of the flight · explain what the problem with the food was · say what the airline should do about it. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir , I am writing

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letter to express my deep

griveances

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grievances

grievance

about the service that I got yesterday when I was travelling through your airline from India to Canada. My name is Jai Verma and I booked my ticket from your company in advance to avoid all the inconveniences , the flight number BMO 15434 flew from Amritsar airport at 10 pm and I got seat number 34 B . Everything was perfect like

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the seat

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was comfortable and

staff

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the staff

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was helpful and enthusiastic .

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, I had a problem with my meal and I felt disappointed and dissatisfied. I am

vegetarian

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a vegetarian

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person

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that

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is why , I ordered

meat free

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meal during my travel but somehow, I didn't get

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my food

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, I was starving throughout my flight. I have medical issues

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, my doctor gave me some medicine to tackle the problem because of not getting food I was unable to take my medicine. I request you to provide coaching to your crew to avoid

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incidents, if someone

have

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fixed

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meal plan

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that will be their duty to provide them

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what they are demanding. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jai

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coherence cohesion

Ensure you have a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion for better logical structure.

coherence cohesion

Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of your complaint to keep your ideas well organized and easy to follow.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are appropriate, which enhances the overall presentation of your letter.

task achievement

Fully address all parts of the task, including providing specific details about the flight, the issue encountered, and a clear request or suggestion for resolution.

task achievement

Maintain a formal yet polite tone, avoiding overly casual language to ensure your letter is appropriately professional.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

203 words

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