Some think that governments should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some

people

say that

governments

ought to help the aged

people

financially,

while

others think that they are responsible for themselves. I agree with the first point

due to

the tax contributions they make throughout their lives, so the

governments

should pay them when they need

.

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However

, some

people

argue that seniors should take of themselves by using their own

money

as the

governments

cannot offer

money

to all their retired persons. The primary reason

of

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this

is the increased cost of living, which hikes day by day.

In addition

, the inflation rate increases every day in almost all developing and

under-developed

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nations. Because of

this

, the authorities of

such

nations cannot afford

offering

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money

to those who are retired. The

cheat

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of not paying

taxes

is another reason, as most

people

try to avoid paying

taxes

and find ways to lessen it.

For example

, in many countries, the majority of employees work under the table to avoid their official income. Despite

this

, I opine that the

governments

should help their citizens by paying their bills. The

governments

should

intoduce

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introduce

a plan through which all retired

people

get sufficient amounts of

money

in their bank accounts every month. The amount of

such

monthly payments should be based on the tax contributions they have made during their entire life. One

such

example is

CPP

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the CPP

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tax deduction in Canada.

This

and the other

taxes

that workers pay the government from their earnings

,

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are considered towards their pensions.

Moreover

, the retired group of

people

often fall

a

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sick and face circumstances under which they often fail to secure themselves financially because of the increased inflation.

Threfore

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Therefore

, I think that government should look after their citizens by paying them monthly pensions. In conclusion,

although

the cost of taking care of the retired group seems not feasible for the government, I think that those who have paid much

taxes

while

working

,

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should be given monthly instalments of

money

back. Considering the rising

of

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prices for everything, the aged ones cannot afford to look after themselves.