Some parents think children should have mobile phones others disagree. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion

Technology

is flourishing by leaps and bounds in every field, especially

communication

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sector. A large number of people say that Smartphones are kept by children

while

others opine that it is

harm

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to kids.

This

essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand, toddlers should have

mobiles

because

it

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they

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provides

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provide

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numerous productive outcomes

to

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for

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them.

This

means the use of a cell phone that

have

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ability

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the ability

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to interact

others

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with others

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such

as friends, family members and outside

of

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people, and

as a result

, it enhances

toddler's

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toddlers'

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social skills.

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, these days, children have a large number of friends

to

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around the world by using social media and their communication

skill

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skills

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also

to be improved.

Moreover

, they can access free online education, learning graphics, and

technology

knowledge by using

mobiles

that will help

to

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their future the reason for that

technology

knowledge is of utmost importance in the future era.

On the other hand

, the use of, smartphones

cause

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causes

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more detrimental effects to infants.

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is because

of

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it affects

kid's

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kids'

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sleeping

pattern

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which

using of

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use

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mobiles

before sleeping that have

ability

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the ability

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to

distrub

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disturb

sleep.

For instance

, social media contains FOMO (fear of missing out) social events and

contents

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content

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, so, when toddlers watch these shows that

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leads

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to

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the feeling of anxiety,

consequently

, they

are suffered

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tremendously.

Hence

, having

mobiles

of vids not only affects! their health but

also

affects

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them psycologically

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psycologically

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psychologically

. In conclusion,

although

having

mobiles

improve

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improves

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a child's social skills and knowledge of

technology

. It causes anxiety

as well as

slepping

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sleeping

disordger

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disorder

.

However

, in my opinion, about

this

, I strongly agree

with

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that pre-teens should have smartphones because

of

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it brings numerous positive benefits to children.