The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart gives information about how often humans in the USA consumed
in
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fast
food
restaurants in the years 2003, 2006 and 2013.
Overall
,
it is clear that
people ate the most fast
food
once a week between 2003 and 2006. It is
also
worth mentioning that people ingested fast
food
more than past once or twice a month
at the end
of the given period. In 2003, 31%
people
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ate fast
food
once a week and in 2006, the figure was outlier again, but it went down to 27% in 2013.
However
, eating fast
food
by Americans one or two times a month was 30% in 2003 and it decreased to 25% in 2006. By 2013, there was an approximately 8% increase from 25% to 33%, which was the largest value in the chart. Only about 4% of the individuals in 2003 ate in quick service restaurants every day.
Moreover
,
this
proportion declined to 3% in both of the other years. The same happened with the proportion of persons who didn't eat fast
food
in restaurants at all with 5% in 2003 to 4% in 2006 and 2013.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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