The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows the
figure
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for the
pupulation
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population
of urban citizens in four different countries in
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Asia
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during
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from
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1970 to 2040.
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, an evident increase can be seen
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the
percentage
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of the urban population in Malaysia,
raising
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rising
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from 30% in 1970 to around 82% in 2040. A similar trend is shown in the
figure
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for the population living in cities in the country of Indonesia (from 14% to 60% during
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years). Both the
percentage
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of the two countries begins growing markedly from the year of 1990 to 2040.
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the
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for people living in urban areas in
Philippines
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the Philippines
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rises from 32% in 1970 to 54% in 2040,
while
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a slight decrease is shown to the year
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2010 (with 43%). As for the
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of the
dewellers
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dwellers
jewellers
living in cities in Thailand is expected to increase slightly to 49% or so in 2040 with a stable
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shown during the years between 1990 to 2020.
Overall
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, the
percentage
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of city
dewellers
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dwellers
in these four Asian countries is predicted to grow
untill
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until
2040.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words figure, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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