The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph indicates the amount of people going for a visit to a specific Caribbean island from the year 2010 to 2017.
Firstly
, a slight increase can be seen in the figure for visitors staying on Linking Words
island
between 2010 to 2013, rising from 0.7 Add an article
the island
an island
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millions
to 1.5 Change to singular
million
Use synonyms
millions
. During the next four years, the amount remained Change to singular
million
in
1.5 Change preposition
at
Use synonyms
millions
except there Change to singular
million
is
Wrong verb form
was
an
only Correct article usage
apply
decline
in the year Correct article usage
a decline
of
2016.
Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, only 0.3 Linking Words
Use synonyms
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
visitors Change preposition
apply
choosing
to stay on cruise ships in 2010, Wrong verb form
chose
while
Linking Words
this
figure rose to 0.5 Linking Words
milliions
in the next year.Correct your spelling
million
millions
Then
, from 2012 to 2017, the number of tourists staying on cruise ships increase constantly (from 0.3 Linking Words
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millions
to 2 Change to singular
million
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millions
).
Change to singular
million
Overall
, the total number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island Linking Words
keeps in
Wrong verb form
kept
an
increasing trend during the period from 2010 to 2017 with the figure Correct article usage
apply
boosts
more than three times from 1 million to 3.5 Wrong verb form
boosting
Use synonyms
millions
.Change to singular
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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