Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have come to know that you are looking for an organizer
of
the Change preposition
for
event
which would
be held Wrong verb form
will
on
next month. Change preposition
apply
Its
an honor if Replace the word
It's
It is
u
select me as the organizer of Correct your spelling
you
such
event
. I know Correct article usage
an event
this
is very
important job Add an article
a very
as well as
responsibility
but Correct article usage
a responsibility
i
assure you that I'll do my duties with great interest.
I really admire Change the capitalization
I
for
taking Correct pronoun usage
you for
such
a bold step to organizing this
social event
,.
Change the punctuation
,
.
This
type of social event
must be held time
to time so that people connected socially and have some plate form to express their thoughts Change preposition
from time
with
each other. Please share with me Change preposition
to
further
information regarding this
event
. So that I could prepare myself to
Change preposition
for
this
job
Let me share one more thing, that I already have an
experience Correct article usage
apply
to
organizing Change preposition
in
such
type of event
.
Last
year an event
organized
by a local NGO and I participated as an organizer of the program Add a missing verb
was organized
me
Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
was a very fruitful experience for me. I learn a lot and feel more self-confident
Hope you never let me down.
Yours Faithfully,
KunwarSubmitted by computersinn2007 on
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General
Consider using a more formal tone and structure in your letter. Avoid using contractions (e.g., 'I'll') and informal language ('u' instead of 'you'). This will help create a more professional impression.
Task Achievement
Clearly state your interest in the role at the beginning of the letter and directly address each of the requirements laid out in the prompt: expressing your interest, requesting more information, and explaining your experience.
Coherence & Cohesion
Work on developing a logical structure for your letter by organizing it into clear paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea: introduction and expression of interest, request for more information, and explanation of your experience.
General
Make sure to proofread your letter to correct grammatical mistakes and improve sentence structure. This will help in making your letter clearer and more professional.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite