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The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The statistics below depict information on the police’s financial status for 2017 and 2018 in one part of Britain. The table gives information about sources that
money
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 came from and the charts are about how it was distributed. The police budget from 2017 to 2018 didn’t experience a steady rise in its statistics, mostly it was stable, and only local taxes climbed sharply from 91.2m to 102.3m. The amount of
money
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 had a gradual increase in total
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, I consider it as a little change in the table below. Looking at how
money
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 was spent, in 2017 monetary loss was mainly about salaries and substantially less about technology for comparison, in 2018 the situation changed slightly, but salaries were still the thing that people mostly spent
money
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 on
otherwise
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, technology experienced a gradual rise. Buildings and transport stayed stable by analyzing the given two years.
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, 2018 was a year of improvement for the police budget, the total amount of
money
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 was higher, and technology started to climb sharply.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words money with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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