You had borrowed a book from the public library however, when you reached home, you found that some important pages were torn away. Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation. You should say: - Mention the book - Mention the pages - Suggest what can be done.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. My full name is Nazarmatov Xojibek. When I was fifteen , I used to borrow book
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books
your
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from your
library
every week. Your library
popular with people and Add a verb
library is
library was
the
bigger than Correct article usage
apply
other
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another library
other libraries
library
in our country. I borrowed book
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a book
your
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from your
library
yesterday . This
book
about
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is about
world war two
. I have been Correct your spelling
World War Two
waiting
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waiting for
this
book
since
five months and I Change preposition
for
achieve
it .
Whenever I reached home, I opened the Wrong verb form
have achieved
book
. The first thing I would like to draw your attention to is when I looked the
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at the
book
some important pages were torn away also
five pages were sticked
. Torn pages were important for me because I have been training Correct your spelling
stuck
from
history subject. It Change preposition
in
for
the first time Add a missing verb
is for
this
problem for me so I am hoping you understand it.
I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem . I suggest that you bring me other
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another book
other books
book
about world war two
.
Yours faithfully,
ZlatanCorrect your spelling
World War Two
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logical structure
Ensure a clear structure for the letter: introduce the problem, provide specific details, and suggest a solution, each in separate paragraphs for clarity.
logical structure
Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and range: frequent grammar mistakes can hinder coherence. Consider revisiting basic grammar rules and sentence structures.
logical structure
Use a more precise and varied vocabulary to more effectively express yourself, especially when describing the issue and suggesting solutions.
greeting and closing
Remember to include a proper closing and signature to your letters. While your ending was appropriately formal, ensure consistency in tone throughout.
complete response
Mention the specific pages that were torn to better achieve the task's requirements. Specific details can enhance the response's completeness.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a formal and respectful tone throughout the letter to align with the nature of the task. You managed this well, particularly in the greeting and closing sections.