Junk food advertising has a harmful effect on society and should be banned. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays
people
are increasing the past
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apply
food
eat. It has a negative effect
on society
so people
must understand that it is a side
effect
and that should limited. I totally agree with this
and I will discuss it.
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are very busy and they are convenient to eat fast food
and they do not have to know about that knowledge
after there is a side
effect
. for instance
, a company of fast food
like pizza, burgers, Coca-Cola, etc. That is
an increasing number of people
who are convenient to easy for a busy lifestyle. I think the government must give advice to society
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. They should Correct word choice
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due to
more and more side
effects of fast food
.
On the other hand
, secondly
, the government should give to
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knowledge
about society
. For example
,Like an advertising. Because people
are always watching TV they can take
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gain
knowledge
about it. They should given to the program about eating fast food
what
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and what
side
effects. The main effect
is increasing nowadays society
majority of people
have noncommunicable diseases. Such
as cancer, diabetes, pressure, cholesterol, etc. Therefore
, always con remember society
fast food
is convenient to eat but there are more and more bad side
effects. This
is the way people
shout understand and they must be limited to the used
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.
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