The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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show
information about how much money was Change the verb form
shows
saled
by Correct your spelling
saved
coffee
and bananas in five European countries in 199 and 2004.
Overall
, there are twice as many sales
in the
Fairtrade- labelled Correct article usage
apply
coffee
in 2004 as sales
in the coffee
in 1999 and in Switzerland. In 1999, Switzerland was the superior contributor to coffee
by earning three million euros, which was twofold and threefold of the UK and Belgium's achievements, respectively.
In terms of Fairtrade-labelled bananas, in Switzerland, the number of sales
in 2004 is three times higher than the number of sales
in 1999, at 47 millions
and 15 Change to singular
million
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
euros respectively. Change preposition
apply
However
, Fairtrade-labelled bananas’s
Change noun form
bananas
sales
had
decreased in 2004, in Sweden and Denmark.
With regards to describing Fairtrade-labelled Unnecessary verb
apply
coffee
, in 2004, coffee’s
Change noun form
coffee
sales
had increased in the given countries and the smallest increased
point was 0,2 in Denmark and Sweden but the highest Replace the word
increase
increased
point was 18,5 in the UK.Replace the word
increase
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