The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant.
The map illustrates the centre of Paris and two locations where a Company want to open a new restaurant.
Overall
, both locations are placed in a busy area and both of them are next to the parks.
Firstly
, location number one is situated to the northwest of the map, next to the park, and close to the Maritime Museum, which has 8000 visitors every day, also
, the location is between two bridges, Bir-Hakeim Bridge on the left and Lena Bridge on the right, just below the park.
Secondly
, location number two, is in a busy area too, just next to the Eiffel Tower, which has 16.000 visitors each day, and down the River Seine. Moving forward, the Art Gallery which is situated in the South and the Sports Centre in South West also
can be an advantage when is about to bring customers to the restaurant, beeing
busy every single day.Correct your spelling
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